 Frozen Music Note 2004-08-24 . chapter 1Wow! Very interesting! This is very cool and I love how you wrote it! Very cool! |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-08-16 . chapter 1Very interesting! I like this. It made you think a bit. Voila, favorite stories list! |
 Pelaysignet 2004-08-13 . chapter 1really really really really good piece. its so imaginative. i have read that piece you spoke of by peter carey and i personally think that yours is better.i lke your descriptions of the dreams and everything soo much. really good stuf. pelay |
 Silver Ice 2004-08-13 . chapter 1Wow that was really good! I like how you had mention of different colors in it and I like how you showed how you really needed the dreams. Excellent work! I start Creative Writing in either September or January. Looks like it's going to be a very good class. :) Keep on writing! |
 whyt forest 2004-08-13 . chapter 1that's a really interesting and well written way to interpret dreams. *thumbs up*. i like how enigmatic it is and also how real it feels.
~whyt forest |
 nick-wordsmith 2004-08-13 . chapter 1Very nice. You should consider classifying this as sci-fi. I'll just have 2 take creative writing wont I? Like a mountain. *tumble* Anyway you created a great world here, to be honest it reminded me of the BFG :). Great work.
Stones decay, words last
Nick |