I love the stanza that starts with "wounds". And the last two stanzas... *sigh*

I don't know what more I can say. Heartfelt work, as always.

wow very powerful and amazingly written... btw thanks for your review

I'm sure you probably weren't expecting me to look into this, and though I am not a believer, I decided to anyway. Your work is looking at, whether it be of God or not. It still speaks to me in a way not many others do.
I really liked this peace it speaks or turmoil and pain. It speaks of blood spilt and has so many emotions flowing in it. It is really a work of art, as all of oyour work I've read is.

Wow...that was so...haunting. Well done, I really enjoyed reading this piece. The words truly resonated through my head after reading this work of art.

I really like this peice of work. I got the e-mail & I will respond to you, a lot has happened to me in the last 5 days. Talk soon!

wonderful job again, and very beautifully written, I love the rythm it has!
I could say everything I said for your other one again, but I think I will spare you ^_^
It's wonderful that you want to pass on to your friend "the secret" and it can be quite frustrating when for some reason you can't, whether its because she won't listen, or for some other reason. I know that is one thing I have struggled with as well, and I will pray for you and your friend!
God bless,
Kat