I thought about checking up your updates, and it was worth it. Really good one, and I've got nothing else to say. It sounds perfect, and I just like the way it flows.
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Ayda

fadingmemory.
This stupid bitch insulted you man. Do not worry I stuffed a whole load of you fucking suck down her throat. Check out the story she wrote called pissing people off is fun and go to chapter 3. Fucking moron I hope she dies.
Anyhow this poem is great, I love the imagery used and the contrasts in the last paragraph. There seems to be a retro apocolyptic feel going on, pretty kick ass. I really look forward to working in the same band as you again.
Ps I know this is lame but fucking read my today I killed God. NOW!

I like the rhythm here and the rhyme. I think walking around town is fun and have with the help of friends adapted the word 'frowser' to mean social misfit in funny clothes. A lot of imagery here too... pretty.

wow. not very happy thoughts as you walk through town, are they? You do a great job putting them down on paper, though.
shea