This is good and i can relate to it. Not everyones life has a happy ending like the fairytales we were told. Keep it up!

wow this is a great poem...im impressed. :O) i especially like the repetition of the "happy endings live in books"..definitely added to the overall effect of the poem.

A great poem. I really like it. Always keep writing.

happy endings live in books
books full of your superb diction
books alive, if true or fiction.
happy endings live in books.
whenever you decide to publish
and make all else sound full of rubbish.

very well written, I like your style, especially the way you ended it, going back to your theme of "Happy endings live in books..." it connected the entire poem together, instead of changing the subject in the middle like some poems I have read. Good job!

in hailing... its inhaling
and you have some questions but you end with periods.. im sure if thats intentional
I like it a lot... its very true and I love the ending about fading into his eyes... thats awesome!

oh wow. here's a reality check for you, eh? i hope that things get better, or better yet, that this isn't your situation..

great use of structure...let me fall
let me fade etc etc. enjoyed this sad write.

wow i love it...another beautiful poem, that again i can relate to. i am looking forward to more. please for the sake of good literature keep on writing
love,
pyra of the flames

I am begining to love all your writings, I love the feel of this poem,
*goes to add you to favourite authors*
You are a truly great writer

Bravo! Very well said. There are a couple ways you can look at that, but what you're saying is really good. Good job, you got talent!

wow very very good!

great poem, I liked it a lot. I somehow can relate as well. -
Akainoyume

I like it a lot, I totally understand where you're coming from. Nice work.

great poem.