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| aripie 2008-10-07 ch 10,  | abuseawesome story - first time read - would love to see an update :) hope this isnt a dead story *cries* |
| Katsumi-kun 2008-09-28 ch 9, | abuseI wonder if Travis is gonna sleep with Lace, probably not but w/e |
| Katsumi-kun 2008-09-28 ch 10, | abuseInteresting story. I sorta wonder which will happen first, Lace telling he is attracted to Colby, or Colby coming out. Also what is up with Rad, Homophobe? Sadist? w/e |
| Projectile Cupcakes 2008-03-14 ch 10, | abuseListen. I must hug you now because if I do You'll be happy and then you'll post the next chapter, *hugs* Are you happy? *hugs again* Now? *Hug* How bout now? I love your story it made me laugh and growl and want to fight Rad. I was so into your story when my friend called she yelled at me for wasting precious minutes of her life. You've damaged my social life and I still love you. *hug* Did it work? |
| the-typical 2007-11-14 ch 10, | abuse::tackle:: Please write more! I .< lol, I'll give you something? A story in return, maybe? Just please write more ::begs:: |
| the-typical 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseLove the start so far!! |
| Kuraiyoshi 2007-08-04 ch 10, | abuseOh, a threesome. Refreshing. It's been awhile since I read one of these. Merci! Hope you update soon. Can't wait for the smut. *winks* |
| paputsza 2006-12-02 ch 3, | abusethe girl says "there's no such thing as a guy who's too beautiful to be straight! but there is for a girl -.o" |
| paputsza 2006-12-02 ch 2, | abuseI know a Lacey. She's a lesbian though, unlike Lace. |
| fearo17 2006-09-18 ch 10, | abuseThis story is tha bomb! I just read this last chapter and can't wait to read more. Even if it has been forever. But watch out your names are getting messed up. When Lace and Travis are kissing you call Lace, Colby. "Travis grinned against Colby’s lips and whispered, “Come to my place.”" |
| Prisoner-11 2006-04-11 ch 10, | abuseYay! Go insane! |
| chocolatedemon 2005-10-30 ch 10, | abuseLike it, like it, like it, like it. Want more. |
| Inherent 2005-09-07 ch 10, | abuseKay, this is good, you should continue soon-ish. Please? |
| es 2005-08-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseI enjoyed the first few chapters, but having Travis as the third wheel in the story is really dragging the whole thing down. Please fix it. :| |
| pneumothorax 2005-08-16 ch 10, | abuseAnother good chapter. Curious how he seems to have confused feelings for Travis sometimes and manages to forget about Colby (it seems to depend whether he's around Colby at the time). That's not a criticism, it's quite realistic in parts. When he's with Travis you showed a nice mix of being comfortable and uncomfortable like you've said he felt. 'Lace slowly lifted an eyebrow suspiciously. “You’re planning on molesting me, aren’t you?”' I liked that line, just because he seems more comfortable and himself. Plus it amused me :) Good chapter; keep writing. |