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kaab 2006-09-22 . chapter 1
Ok... so it's been a long time... where are all your updatES? I have been waiting for years for all youe UPDATES! Where have you been? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE... hehehhe...

Kaab be out!!
Shadows of Eternity 2005-06-24 . chapter 1
Great story! Update!
kongo 2004-12-01 . chapter 1
hey.. you started but then you never finished it... it's been so long now! I beleive it's been over ages.. i'm getting old... so where's the story?

HELP! She's not writing anymore!

hehe.. :) ja-na

~kaab~
ally2003 2004-09-28 . chapter 1
Please update! I really like this story.
Yisa 2004-08-31 . chapter 1
Hey girl!
Wowowowowow! Totally an astounding chapter so far... I have to tell you the truth girl, you've improved a whole lot since your first fiction ever! You've seriously gotten a whole lot better, in fact, you've gotten better than me!
I have to say, it was a very interesting chapter... very interesting and totally amazing. It totally wants the reader to read more and more... so I'm speaking not only for myself, but for everyone else too... UPDATE!
Anyways, I'll be updating mine pretty soon too so see ya! Just dropped by to tell you what a way cool job you did!
Yisa
"I'm nobody. Nobody's perfect; therefore I'm perfect."
Yisa 2004-08-30 . chapter 1
Hey girl...pretty long chapter here...anyways... guess what? I know have internet! Yeah!! But anyways, I can't actually review yet cause I didn't read it yet. I'm saving it for laters... I gotta go to sleep and wake up early tomorrow (I'm in college now, k? sheesh, gimme a break already!)
Oh well... I'll get back to you okay? And keep up the great work!
Yisa
kaab 2004-08-24 . chapter 1
hm... it seems dark and mysterious... exciting... damn, wait til i tell Yisa about this story.. oh and by the way.. she went to Minnesota to enjoy her last dying days of freedom before she is off the COLLEGE! if you know.. she lives somewhere quite far from me.. so imma miss her.. but, it's ok!! well keep on with the UPDATES! This ones interesting... AND KEEP ON WITH VIA E-MAIL... it's seems as though it's getting to the finner parts!! kinda funny how a model could be so stupid and not notice attration between the two.. and it's ok with LAW, i never really like the quiet guy.. he seems easily manipulative and whatever else.. oh well.. KEEP IT UP!
Ti 2004-08-17 . chapter 1
i luv ur style of writing! its so awesome!! i can like totally see evrything happening, like in a movie! email me on this one too plz! UPDATE SOON!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-
Orient Fox 2004-08-14 . chapter 1
Another story?
It's really good so far, and has a hint of Victorian era intrigue and interest to it. And it seems to have loads of good potential. Have you put Via Email on hiatus? *hopes fervently that it hasn't* (Cough cough, nudge nudge, hint hint)
This story is written really well so far, with a lot of detail that makes the reader go WHOA!lol! And well, the whole plot is very interesting so far.
Who's to say that this story isn't good? You've got the greatest way of wording things, and you make the most unusual things seem interesting. lol!
And as for the Teddy Bear Touch, well, I think that it's really funny how Hannah, at the age of 19, still finds comfort in the most simplest things. It makes you realize that even older supposedly more mature people still can have some insecure feelings that only a childhood toy/friend will ease away. ^_^ I still go through that myself.
Anyhows, keep on writing. You've got a nice, unique way of writing, and stay that way. It brings you out above the usual humdrum authors.
UPDATE!
*Orient Fox*
faith 2004-08-14 . chapter 1
awesome story!! please update soon!
blueangel87 2004-08-14 . chapter 1
this loks good :) pls write more
plaingirl 2004-08-14 . chapter 1
ei, i'm liking this story...weird and creepy...that's what supernatural stories look like...can u add some more exciting and puppet thing scenes on it...it makes me shiver *lol*. great job and please update soon!
Giggless2004 2004-08-13 . chapter 1
Interesting story, I'm liking it so far, I think you've come up with a rather interesting story, i like :-D Um there's only a few things that i'll bring to your attention (don't worry nothing bad or anything lol) but i think you might have slipped up with the name of your main character Hannah at one point. " "What did you mean by what you said earlier?" Alison raised her voice to be heard by the man ahead of her." it was in the that part, you have the girl named Alison, instead of Hannah, I'm guessing that you might have originally named the character Alison, but decided to change it lol (just thought i'd point that out for ya, with editing its hard to catch everything, so its all good ;) haha) um the only other thing that im gonna comment on is with the ending, how easily she seems to accept it all... i dunno a little something seems missing. Don't get me wrong though, your story is really good and I think you should most definitely keep writing it (and update soon too :`D) I just thought i'd be a good reviewer and point those out. Hope I might have been a little bit helpful, and please **gives puppy dog face** update soon. Good job!
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