 shadowhunter 2005-11-29 . chapter 2 OK, i probably have already reviewed before but i'll do it again. Sheldon and Caleb are so awesome and you managed to bring them to life. You're the only thriller fictionpress writer that i've gone back to read your works again and again. Please keep writing more! i'll review again! |
 lfl 2005-08-19 . chapter 3 Thought this story was very well put together. Only suggestion I have is use your spell check, or proof-read your work. Great job. |
 ALandis 2004-08-28 . chapter 3*sigh* So cute! I especially like they way you ended it! |
 MusicalMooky 2004-08-26 . chapter 3That was awesome! I loved this adventure. The Wu Shu was so cool. Ha Philip must have been so surprised that Caleb could fight back. Thank goodness he can see again. Please write some more adventures! |
 Raven O'Connor 2004-08-25 . chapter 3I'm glad Caleb could see again! That was very interesting with the martial arts bit. Good stuff. Can't wait for their next adventure. |
 FunkyGarfield 2004-08-25 . chapter 2 I like this adventure a lot so far. It has so much emotional depth. It's nice to see that Sheldon and Caleb are not always as strong or invicible. I love it when they are, but I love that you've developed this other side of them that we can see. |
 FunkyGarfield 2004-08-22 . chapter 1 I hope Sheldon can stop the mad scientist before he claims more lives. Caleb had better survive. |
 ALandis 2004-08-21 . chapter 2Yay! Gotta love these stories! I put you on the author alert list just so I can read!! But I have a question about the characters... Are they based on real life characters? Like you and a friend or something?
Anyway, I really like it!! Keep up the good work! |
 Ellie 2004-08-19 . chapter 2 Yah! Caleb's going to learn how to see without his eyes. How cool. He better hang in there so he can have a good fight with Philip. |
 MusicalMooky 2004-08-19 . chapter 2I definately want to find out what happens. This is so cool. Ha, Philip is so confident, and Caleb will be his downfall.
I can't believe that Philip thinks that he really has the Queen of Diamonds. How can he feel like he was really better than him if he has to blind them and then beat them when they are almost defenseless? Now that's really sadistic. Please update! |
 Raven O'Connor 2004-08-18 . chapter 2Poor Caleb. Let's hope they find that person soon, and get the antidote!
Update soon! |
 AnimeElf 2004-08-17 . chapter 1 What exactly are Caleb's other senses that he has to train in order to survive? His other five senses or maybe a sixth sense. If it's his sixth sense that would be really cool. Maybe the rest of the agents should train their sixth senses, so that in case of blindness of complete darkness they are not that vulnerable. Cheers! |
 Ellie 2004-08-17 . chapter 1 Another adventure! *jumps for joy* I've been checking your profile for a while now, to see if you had continued any of your stories. Please do, because this fan loves it. :D |
 Raven O'Connor 2004-08-15 . chapter 1I'm so excited to see a new story from you! I like to read Sheldon and Caleb's adventures. Great chapter on this one. Please update soon. |
 MusicalMooky 2004-08-14 . chapter 1 Hello! I'm so glad that you've put up another adventure! I love them to bits. The best part about these adventures are that you always keep people guessing as to who is after who and why until the very end. This is great. You're chapters are wonderfully long and detailed. I like the way you set up the story and made us keep guessing as to when Caleb would get hit with the chemicals. Are you by any chance updating Serpents Kiss? Anyway, please update this story again. I hope this review keeps Sheldon and Caleb employed! :D |