"her aches are the nimbus / her tears are the rains." i really felt those lines. you're an amazing poet, just such sad subject matter...

i like this!its very,, everyone can relate to this!the whole standing infront of the mirror cud b a metaphor for alot of things.i took it as she was kinda judging hereself since generally thats what u do with mirror!anyways i love this!WELL DONE!love and admiration Gretchen45 xplease review my story: truly madly deeply.x tanx xx

He better be there for her...hehe. This is great, I like it. Nice job.

Flows nicely with a non cheesy rhyme thing. That is very difficult to do. Nice job.