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| the-truth-is-verity 2008-05-30 ch 20,  | abuselol.. wow. really really great story :D so great that i've been reading it instead of revising for my end-of-year History exam. i can't wait to read more of you're stuff, you're a talented author :) |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 ch 20, | abuseYay! Greatness! I loved it all! Aw, I love Elijah and Gabriel. I'm sad it's all done though! :( Great work though :) |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 ch 16, | abuseOMG! I'm so engrossed I can barely tear myself away to review...I'm sad it's nearly finished! :( Ahh well I still have a few chapters to read... I really Gabriel! He's a cool character and Elijah's just so sweet. Great Job! |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 ch 11, | abuseHehe, I liked this chapter! Lol. Very good! |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 ch 6, | abuseUh-oh! O_o |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 ch 5, | abuseOMG! Wow I'm finding it hard to find what to say about this...but I definately like this story! Very Good so far...the occasional missing word but that's okay since the story is so good! |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 ch 2, | abuseVery good :) Poor Jay...but I think I like him, I think... |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseHehe, very interesting beginning. Lol. I'm too giggly to think of anything more to write so... Um, I like this :) |
| let me scream my heart out 2006-04-20 ch 20, | abuseexcellet story |
| Maris. S 2006-03-27 ch 20, | abuseHeyo there love!! I'm so sorry that it took me so long to review the final chapters for this story! I hope that you can forgive me! I love the way that this all ended!! Annet didn't go too psych and she didn't physically hurt either of them! Well save for Eli...But at least he was able to recover! And there's nothing better than hott m/m make up sex!! ^^ Sometime guys have it so lucky... well the gay ones anyway... Too bad that this is the end!! I was raelly hoping to get some more info on Kevin and Seth!! But it's all okieso!! I'll set my imagination to work! Great story love ^^ |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-03-13 ch 20, | abuseEekles! I hope you started it already! *goes to check*! |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-03-13 ch 19, | abuseSO SAD! IT'S OVER! But the Sethyness is next! That was a hot ending, though. ^~ |
| Prisoner-11 2006-03-07 ch 20, | abuseLol. 'Joe as in I-sleep-with-my...' Yes, I love that part. The best part of comedy is tie ins, and on going jokes. |
| Shadow 3013 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely a horrible thing to have happen... but also very, very hot. *shakes her head and keeps reading* |
| bambi4real 2006-03-05 ch 20, anon. | abuseI don't really know what I want to see for seth/kevin I really like to be suprised. But I do know that when both characters seem to take on seme/uke traits and they are indifferientiable it irritates the mess out of me. Oh speaking of such I do kno wwhat I would like to see...kevin seems too laid back shake him up a bit with Seth. Maybe have Seth be like totally free with people he doesn't have to necessarily cheat or anything...Or better yet let kevin find out about Seth's little night with Gaby/Eli and not be okay with it. HEheehe! Ohh too much time to think. I also forgot who Joe was...please jog my aging memory...pwease! |