   Tempre's Twilight 2009-03-29 . chapter 20awesome story! and i'm so pleased that there is one going over Kevin (?) and Seth is so sweet, cause i was hoping there would be more than that :) |
 the-truth-is-verity 2008-05-30 . chapter 20lol..
wow. really really great story :D
so great that i've been reading it instead of revising for my end-of-year History exam.
i can't wait to read more of you're stuff, you're a talented author :) |
 MorganTW 2006-07-09 . chapter 20Yay! Greatness! I loved it all! Aw, I love Elijah and Gabriel. I'm sad it's all done though! :(
Great work though :) |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 . chapter 16 OMG! I'm so engrossed I can barely tear myself away to review...I'm sad it's nearly finished! :( Ahh well I still have a few chapters to read... I really Gabriel! He's a cool character and Elijah's just so sweet.
Great Job! |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 . chapter 11 Hehe, I liked this chapter! Lol. Very good! |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 . chapter 6 Uh-oh! O_o |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 . chapter 5 OMG! Wow I'm finding it hard to find what to say about this...but I definately like this story! Very Good so far...the occasional missing word but that's okay since the story is so good! |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 . chapter 2 Very good :) Poor Jay...but I think I like him, I think... |
| MorganTW 2006-07-09 . chapter 1 Hehe, very interesting beginning. Lol. I'm too giggly to think of anything more to write so...
Um, I like this :) |
 let me scream my heart out 2006-04-20 . chapter 20excellet story |
 Maris. S 2006-03-27 . chapter 20Heyo there love!! I'm so sorry that it took me so long to review the final chapters for this story! I hope that you can forgive me! I love the way that this all ended!! Annet didn't go too psych and she didn't physically hurt either of them! Well save for Eli...But at least he was able to recover! And there's nothing better than hott m/m make up sex!! ^^ Sometime guys have it so lucky... well the gay ones anyway...
Too bad that this is the end!! I was raelly hoping to get some more info on Kevin and Seth!! But it's all okieso!! I'll set my imagination to work!
Great story love ^^ |
 Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-03-13 . chapter 20Eekles! I hope you started it already! *goes to check*! |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-03-13 . chapter 19 SO SAD! IT'S OVER! But the Sethyness is next! That was a hot ending, though. ^~ |
 Prisoner-11 2006-03-07 . chapter 20Lol. 'Joe as in I-sleep-with-my...' Yes, I love that part. The best part of comedy is tie ins, and on going jokes. |
 ShadowGal 2006-03-05 . chapter 1That was absolutely a horrible thing to have happen... but also very, very hot. *shakes her head and keeps reading* |
FictionPress.com - let the words flow