I Hpe you add more soon. Very good. I'm not who is doing the killing but my money is either on aspen or that Sommer girl.

WrittingIsMyDrugOfChoice

ii stumbled upon this story when i was searching for ideas.. your idea is very good but i do think your chapters have a too much dialogue.. it doesn't really seem to flow if you know what i mean..

Just in case you come back on here again... This is an awesome story and you should keep it up! Hoping to hear more soon...

Do you use your real name? Because it's very admirable. Your first chapter seemed very short but was well written. I noticed you haven't updated for more than a year. I'm sure you must have an understandable explanation for not updateing...you do right?

omg this is an awesome story i love it! please update soon

Great story! I'm adding u to my favs! :D

Hope u contine

I don't really have anything to critisize... I'm reviewing so u know u have readers, I know it helps to fire up ur writing.

Wow, this story is amazing! I read the whole thing in one sitting! Who's the guy that tried to drown Annie? Update soon, please!

wow - i really like this, gives me shivers, please please write more! what has happened to brace - what did gavin do? why was it a different ring? i need answers - please please update!

I just ventured into this website, and ur story is the first one i lay my eyes on... and it really took my attention away from all other things... it's a real thriller... update soon, i can't wait to read what's coming out next...

Thats a very good fic so far!Update soon!

I thought it was very well written and i enjoyed what i read. This isn't a review though its more just me saying i like it :)

Hi! This is very good so far. I CAN'T BELIEVE I'm the first to review you. You should have gotten 10 on your first chapter. Oh well...
Keep it up, it's getting very good.
Cheers,
-Juri