make a song outta this! if u dont i will! dunt worry i'll still give u credit, but these words cant go without music. i wont let it happen

i love it... it's so mysterious, yet with an uderlying force. i especially like
"the sun's tears light the shadows"
and
"the mists divulge an ancient lie
as the smoke hits the floor"
keep writing!

I think (I warn this may shound stupid) That it's about falling into darkness and hate, and seeing a light. Then when you find it the sun finally comes up and your free. Or maybe not . . . Oh well I'm just werid like that. Good job