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| tomato-greens 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseIs vi. red or any color in the red field? My brain's technical difficulties aside, you capture the essence of every color. My ideas of essences are slightly different than yours, but that is only to be expected, and you write it so well that I'm drawn to your opinion far more strongly than I'm drawn to mine. Though I'm not blind (far from it! especially with my glasses), I get the feeling behind the verses; but especially because I do know the colors, I can definitely relate the visual to the written word. Fantastically well-done. |
| do not resuscitate 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abusemagnificently beautiful. i love this times infinity. the idea behind it... you carried it out so perfectly. absolutely lovely. |
| Sugar On The Asphalt 2004-09-22 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. The stanza breakings are ideal. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseAgain I am absolutly floord. You have a true talent and way with words. Absolutly breathtaking. I can't believe that you havn't gotten any reviews for this. Great job, keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |