love the stroy, its great. cIt was such a great story, very exciting.

I got a hairbrush! What?! Are YOU SERIOUS?! WOW! That was so sweet of Jessie to decide to go back w/ David! They are my all time favorite couple!

It's done already? Wah, I want my bottle mommy! *runs off crying*

I was GOING to wait to review since it took me 4ever, but I wanted the cookie and hairbrush and stuff! yay! I WON! Woah woah! Go Courtney *cabbage patch*

I like it. But i dunno if u noticed it but at the end there they both get in to the "passenger seat" lol whos drivin?

Did you really hafta make David the **. I mean really there are a lot of good names out there. No? I thought not.

I so wanted to go on a road trip this summer, but i got a job and i couldnt drive on my own... Good luck on the whole 1 chick and 4 dudes workin out. hahaha someones going to get hurt before this whole thing is over. Okay on to the next chapter

COOKIES AND HAIRBRUSHES! wow...BISCUITS!!

HA! YOU WROTE A CHAPTER AS SHORT AS ALL OF MINE! MUAHAHAHA! Sorry...I've had a little too much to drink. Ok bye.

I'm too lazy to sign in...hehe. Wonderful use of vocabulary and imagery, Dev. *pats back* Great effort!

I'm too lazy to sign in...hehe. Wonderful use of vocabulary and imagery, Dev. *pats back* Great effort!

I'm too lazy to sign in...hehe. Wonderful use of vocabulary and imagery, Dev. *pats back* Great effort!

O that was so good! Sorry I haven't reviewed, I was just like gone FOREVER! That was great, and I thought that the last chappy was so funny!

ON THE WINGS OF LOVE UP AND ABOVE THE CLOUDS...something something something. *shrug* Today, I was singing "Grease" and Mom said "How do you know that?" and I said "Clay Aiken, of course, but he makes it sexayer, 'cause the does the hip shimmy and sounds sexayer." Alright.

That was so funny! This story is AWESOME!