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| Sharpie Red 2004-12-01 ch 1,  | abuseAwo\some job...yayy I have awoken from my eternal slumber now Im revewin stuff again...now I just start to put stuff up again...lol...Great job |
| nesy 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abuseReally, really beautiful.I loved it. |
| Muttly4 2004-08-14 ch 1, | abuseNot to bad, but really needs punctuation. |
| Midnight Proc 2004-08-14 ch 1, | abuseWonderful poem... I loved the last two lines: "It's like a dream that I pray I don't wake up from/ keep me in the deep sleep of your love". It wrapped up the poem so well... |
| negligible fictional force 2004-08-14 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is BEAUTIFUL. *applauds heartily* i love this. it's so sweet and ethereal and you bring the emotion wonderfully. a perfect masterpiece. well done. |
| ShedMySkin 2004-08-14 ch 1, | abuse*speechless* This is a great poem. I hope the person loves you back the way you love them. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-08-14 ch 1, | abuseLove this, I can so relate to what your saying, especially about the silence inbetween you, oh yeah, I've been their. I really love your style of writing, its so honest to youself yet also relatable to the reader. Beautiful poem of truth. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |