I understand, I understand. I'm going to try to give you an insightful review..."tottery kind of grasp?" made me think of a toddler's hand slipping on some sort of porcelain vase. at the pottery barn. I wonder if that name's taken. if not, it's mine. It is rather humorous. to people like us, at least. yes, to hell with the both genders. fire 'em down. cheers.

M...I love it. Not a very indepth comment by me, but hey. ** happens. *Yummy poem, love it! Keep it up*

¿Androgeny? An old issue, interestingly treated.
~m~

not bad... but not your best (I understand the situation)... yeah
many times we have all been faced with asking ourselves that question... very true... keep writing
XOXO
meggy

'This daunting on me, I wish it would
deteriorate, and I could become numb'->I like that line a lot...it really says something about your state of mind as you wrote it...still beautiful, though. Keep writing!!
--Sarah/Aeritone

Excellent poem! Magnific! Exquisit! Love it!

hm...i like sex...its a bit confusing, but if you look at this from far away it becomes confusingly oddly simple...or maybe im wayy too sleep deprived, anywayz, muchly nice

lol... it is kinda funny... I like it thought and ive thought that often! Sorry about the mistake with the word bluster i had just never heard of it... sorry