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| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseI understand, I understand. I'm going to try to give you an insightful review..."tottery kind of grasp?" made me think of a toddler's hand slipping on some sort of porcelain vase. at the pottery barn. I wonder if that name's taken. if not, it's mine. It is rather humorous. to people like us, at least. yes, to hell with the both genders. fire 'em down. cheers. |
| TroubleBreathing 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseM...I love it. Not a very indepth comment by me, but hey. ** happens. *Yummy poem, love it! Keep it up* |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-10-02 ch 1, | abuse¿Androgeny? An old issue, interestingly treated. ~m~ |
| genny marie 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abusenot bad... but not your best (I understand the situation)... yeah many times we have all been faced with asking ourselves that question... very true... keep writing XOXO meggy |
| Aeritone 2004-08-24 ch 1, | abuse'This daunting on me, I wish it would deteriorate, and I could become numb'->I like that line a lot...it really says something about your state of mind as you wrote it...still beautiful, though. Keep writing!! --Sarah/Aeritone |
| CrazyChik 2004-08-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem! Magnific! Exquisit! Love it! |
| not sure yet 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abusehm...i like sex...its a bit confusing, but if you look at this from far away it becomes confusingly oddly simple...or maybe im wayy too sleep deprived, anywayz, muchly nice |
| simpleplan13 2004-08-15 ch 1, | abuselol... it is kinda funny... I like it thought and ive thought that often! Sorry about the mistake with the word bluster i had just never heard of it... sorry |