Wow, well written even if slightly psychotic...who am I to call this psychotic? I think its an awesome piece, good description

deep and dramatic. very very good. Ta ta for now

I really like this and the way it's written idk what about it but i can just like form an imagine of it.

I like this poem, the imagery is great. I can see your eyes in it, and the lines match well with eachother.

Echoes of Scent of a Woman. Dark mood. m