Very cool. You bring a great issue to the fore "Trafficking white cause that's what the blacks do,
Stuck in the slums, destined to live? only a few" But how you compared the plight of the Blacks in the ghettos to the "40's Jew" makes it so much harsher and makes it grab on.

I feel the anger in the poem. Brilliant. Well done.

Hey, sweet poem you've got here. It's like a freestyle rap, it's great. Really enjoyed reading it.