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| Kohl Smeared Soulmate 2008-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseIf everyone in the world had the guts to that I would bake a ginat cookie and share it between them all. The enjambment is great and the end made me grin in the goofiest way. |
| I love video games 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abusei love your poem |
| Account 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseYour poetry is so sweet, I've faved several of them! I hope you keep writing more often, because you're very talented. There is something about this piece, as well as others of yours I adore, that no matter how simple they appear, have such a deeper story to them and really motivate and inspire me to write my own stories. Kudos and best of luck in the future with your work. -Prof. D |
| Darkness of Insanity 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. I'm just like that. Sitting in the corner, far away from everyone. And just hating the world and wanting to get out of it. The description is wonderful and so exact and true. You did so good on this. I love it. -*-GiNnY-*- |
| Lines 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuse*bursts into tears* Someone understands me! You know that kid who always sits as far away from others as possible and sits quietly hating the world? That's me. Thank you so much! *hugs* |
| lemondrop 2004-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is beautiful! my gosh. we've all seen that guy... I do love your work... |
| Kitten of Rain 2004-09-04 ch 1, | abuseheh. that was cool. |
| Fabian Cortez 2004-08-23 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, the scene described is emotionally captivating. Well Done KEEP WRITING! F.C |