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| Siriusly James 2005-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow. Sorry if it seems like gloating, but this reminds me of myself and my closet, divided in two parts: One with girl clothes and one with boy clothes. I need to have it like that, because I don't know if I'll be Joe or Josephine tomorrow. This is beautifully written, and you have a very good choice of words - the title, also, is good, because it is such a small word, yet it contains so much. My favourite line is "You seemed to be from some beautiful androgynous planet", because that is my home planet. |
| Naomi Schemer 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is great. Is this based on a person you know? If it is I admire that person too. It can be so hard living in this type of community sometimes. Its great being able to stand up. -Naomi |