 Alhana Starbreeze 2005-05-11 . chapter 1Aww... thats so sweet, or sour... w/eI'm liking the tea thing! Keep it up man! |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-03-03 . chapter 1aw... that is sweet and rather pleasant~~
cute~~ i liked!
keep writing! |
 Gojyo 2005-01-27 . chapter 1I think that... my lifes a lot like that one day seems different then the other. Like a different flavour.. very very good ^^ |
 white-clouds 2004-10-23 . chapter 1Very nice! I like how you described life as tea. So true... Keep on writing!!
~Lara;) |
 Twizzlers 2004-08-22 . chapter 1love it.
that's all i can say, or it'll ruin it
but i love it. |
 Dolenquarion 2004-08-16 . chapter 1I like the simplicity that is evident in your writing. Splitting it into stanza's would be an idea. I esp like how you relate life to tea. Good work! |
 Diva Chiba 2004-08-16 . chapter 1Very interesting perspective on life!! I really liked the way you put this onetogether. It is, as you said, pleasant and it has a neat simplicity that manages to well get your point across. Keep writing!
~Diva Chiba |