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| Alhana Starbreeze 2005-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseAww... thats so sweet, or sour... w/eI'm liking the tea thing! Keep it up man! |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abuseaw... that is sweet and rather pleasant~~ cute~~ i liked! keep writing! |
| Gojyo 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI think that... my lifes a lot like that one day seems different then the other. Like a different flavour.. very very good ^^ |
| white-clouds 2004-10-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I like how you described life as tea. So true... Keep on writing!! ~Lara;) |
| Twizzlers 2004-08-22 ch 1, | abuselove it. that's all i can say, or it'll ruin it but i love it. |
| Dolenquarion 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI like the simplicity that is evident in your writing. Splitting it into stanza's would be an idea. I esp like how you relate life to tea. Good work! |
| Diva Chiba 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting perspective on life!! I really liked the way you put this onetogether. It is, as you said, pleasant and it has a neat simplicity that manages to well get your point across. Keep writing! ~Diva Chiba |