Reviews for The Chronicles of Enghel: The Road

Tuomas Hassam-Smith 2004-08-23 ch 1,	Thanks for the reviews so far, I'm flattered that I've pleased so many of you (that was sarcasm by the way). I'll be updating nearly every day so keep coming back for more!
Lord Iceberg 2004-08-21 ch 4,	I like this story! It's good to hear about other people's view of heaven/hell! And the story is in-drawing (whatever the word is,) so I can't stop reading now I've started! Please update soon!
Sky is Gray 2004-08-20 ch 2,	So here I am, returning the favor. I read both of the chapters, and I was really taken aback by the originality of this story. Seriously, great job. It shows creativity. The dialogue is great as well. The only thing I would recommend is, while you are writing your stories, go to dictionary.com and use the thesaurus. It never hurts to get a few new words in there for common terms and phrases. Adding description is key. Besides, it does wonders for your vocabulary. All in all, I really enjoyed this story, and am surprised to be the first one to review it. Truly, keep up the good work.