 Midnight Proc 2004-08-16 . chapter 1Kind of reminds me of the Police's "Every Breath You Take". *song springs up* So now it's going to be stuck in my head all day... Anyhooters, I liked how you use lines of every length -- it broke the monotany, forcing me to really read the lines. I especially liked how you wrap up the poem: "I am the wanderer of your dreams." Good job. |