Powerful, at least for me, I can relate to this, very very good.

I liek it.. especially the ending! THanks for your review... my bf reads my stuff too adn he doesnt know I cut... so i dunno what hell say after reading this... guess I'll find out!

wow, i like that one a lot, its amazing

No I don't know who you are... hm... You need to capitalize your Is. Otherwise it was really good. It's nothing to be ashamed of. I rather like it. Please R&R some of my stuffs(they show what people truly should be ashamed of.)