yay! everyone lived! i thought for sure someone was going to die! im glad they didn't tho...was that 3rd guy loki?

wow great chapter! just how long was Blaine standing there?

o my gosh! i forgot about yuki! wow great chapter! i really don't know what to say...keep it commin'!

Ah! no! not suspense! they all live right? i mean, you're not gonna do something stupid, like, kill off Jabez or Keena and not the other, right?! RIGHT!? please tell me after all that, Nuala will live through this! awesome chapter! but...update as soon as possible! thanx! you rock my sox! woot!

yay! good chapter! no more vague-ness! hooray! don't worry about the frequencey of your updates! you're actually very good about it! some authors (like myself) don't update for months! so your doing fine! woot! write on! (and on and on and...)

woot! very good! Alerik is so confusing. what a weirdo. o well, thats better than being like Blaine i suppose. awesome chapter, however you're writing is still comming across as sort of vague. i'm not sure why tho. Also, you sort of left the thing with the maps hanging in the air. its unclear wut the results were.

yay! great chapter! i loved the last line about Jabez setting Kelan on fire! that was great! lol! good job! this chapter is a bit brief but thats ok.

woot! great chapter! i just love this kinda stuff! this is so good! i do hope you continue to write after this story! great job! VERY nice descriptions!

::peeved:: o! wut a sick and twisted little mad Blaine seems to be! wut a jerk! i sure hope you kill him off! kthis chapter seemed a bit vague but perhaps thats cuz there wasn't much action. Keep up the good work! woot! PS wuts up with Kuna??

ah the recap. not all that exciting but useful. i can't wait for the next installment! keep goin!

uh-oh, seems as though Keena's losing her touch! what a dirty rotten delivery man, hope Kuna got 'im. can't wait to see what's in the box!
i must say - not one of your more thrilling chapters, but good none the less! woot! keep up the good work!

o! great chapter! interesting creature! i really like, even tho it is an evil little thing! great job, but wut was the point of putting blaine in there??

o me likes! the next chapter will prove to be quite interesting indeed! (y'know at first i thought Kelan was this incredibly serious refined...discrete type of guy, but apparently not.) way to go! woot! ^^v

yay! finally! *happy dance!* its about time! 'her sudden hold on him was almost painfully tight, but he wasn't complaining.' LOL! sry, i just find that part really funny! great job! woot! ^^
PS. lol yuki and kelan made a bet! lol lol! that was one of the best parts of the chapter! ^^v i love it! ur so good! keep it up! u rock! *wonders what the nasty little demon is up to*

*happy sigh* this is so GOOD! please update as soon as possible i can't wait to see what'll happen next! wot!
(tsk tsk, Yuki and Kelan are being so very naughty! spying is not nice! lol)