THIS IS AWESOME
AND VERY FUNNY
CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS
XoXo
Shiraz

OH Love's at work here people! I think Adam And Saphron are finally admitting their love at this very moment..next update pls!!

Okay.
1) I know you haven't updated since 2005, but please update.
2) Yes, I am another reader of yours and I'm mad that you haven't recently updated
3) It was a good chapter
4) IT'S BEEN 3 YEARS! I NEED AN ENDING ALREADY!

Now, with that said, please update soon :)

Hey man! This story is one of the best in FP...Please update...It's been way too long...and you don't have to be worried about lack of readership...cuz...there are hordes of people hungry/eager for the chapters to come! Beautiful story you have here...please update...don't want it to go to waste do we?

Update Please?

*tear,tear* I've just spent hours reading your awesome story and I just looked at the last update and it hasn't been for so long!! WAH! your story is so cute too!! you HAVE to update!

hey, new reader here. your story is good! My type of story hehehe. Haven't finished all chapters but I can tell I like it :)

hahhaa, the ending is funny!! lol anyway this is a great story i must say! just simply brilliant! really hope u r gonna continue this story though...you've got a great plot going on.. UPDATE SOON!^^ pretty pleassee? *gives a puppy dog face* =P

Sure... they REALLY seem like they hate each other. Notice the hint of sarcasim.

great story. please update. dying to know when they will finally reveal that they do love each other

aw that's so cute. and yes i did read the whole thing but in favor of the homework that i haven't been doing for the past hour while i've been reading your story i was saving time by not reviewing after every chapter as is my custom.

well... i tend to switch point of view every other chapter like you do... but i'm of the opinion that it's more challengeing to write it without doing that and better writing when it's just from one point of view. But I do it like you do... so i'm hardly one to be talking.

you said floor when it should have been ground

o i like it. and i hope she gets kidnapped by pirates...

nice, maybe add a slight touch of discription and you should have it, the Rande place you were a bit vauge on it, when writing rember to include snapshots with smell, sight, feeling, and what you hear