Nice. Exciting. Interesting. It avoids cliches that people get caught up in. Well done. I can't wait to see what happens next.

--Hel

Nyar, finally got around to freakin' posting what I think 'bout this. ^_^ Great story, as anythin' with fantasy by you is! I can't wait to read more, so pwease KUTGW!

Yay! I like this story much! Keep writing it, pretty please . . . *puppy dog face*
Umm, how did Sevren become an apprentice anyway? And what about Teranji? Is he gay? *raised eyebrow in humor/suspicious manner* Not that I would really care, but is he?

It's really good Raerae! I hope that you continue it. ^_^ i can't wait to see what happens.