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i-see-faeries 2008-06-27 ch 30,	abuseSo this took me a while to read. I love it though. Gunther started annoying me after a while though. That kid has serious issues, way beyond what was mentioned in the story, issues that took two stories to resolve. Haha. But that's just character, no flaw on your writing skills, which were phenomenal. Loves.
Silent Retribution 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseOh i get this. The boy stuck his mind inside a book. nifty.
Fictatiousrambler 2008-05-05 ch 29,	abuseI loved this nearly as much as i loved CRDP the beginnings.
Kalista Jia 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abusewow what a cool first chapter !
Sw33tR0ze 2007-12-25 ch 27,	abuseI don't really like this chapter. Just being honest, but I still love your story! But I think Brax doesn't deserve Wilber!
Sw33tR0ze 2007-12-25 ch 25,	abuseI love Strips!
True.Randomness 2007-11-24 ch 30,	abuseAh Pooh, it sucks that the story ended here. I like your cases a lot and loved the fact that I got buches of my favorite couple, Gun and Arc. I can't wait to read your next instalment!
LKLTB 2007-09-27 ch 28, anon.	abuseI would like to applaud you on looking up the meaning of the king's name. Most people use Latin without bothering to do so. However, I would like to point out that the definition 'dark' is somewhat misleading in this case. As far as I know, it is only used in that sense when referring to a person's emotional state, i.e. in a dark (black) mood. From what I have learned, the noun 'dark' is actually "tenebrae" and the adjective is "obscurus". This is by no means the most official translation, only what I have been taught. Also, this is definitely not a criticism as you seem to have put more work into this than most people. I just thought you might like to know.
PB&J 2007-09-11 ch 11, anon.	abuseI thought wilber moved on? xP common some Archer & gunny action! xP
Liz919 2007-03-26 ch 30,	abuseI love this set of stories. Gunny and Arch are awesome. However I would highly suggest you get a beta. You have a lot of spelling errors that are simply typos or substitutions of similar sounding words...it's not hard to read over them but it would be easier to read if they weren't there. However having said that the stories are still awesome. and Braxton is an **.
Ruri Star Sykel 2006-12-21 ch 30,	abusegreat stories i enjoied them!
readmerant 2006-11-11 ch 30, anon.	abuseI love these stories The CRDP is so much fun to read about and the chareters are just so cute! I sorry I did not reviwe every chapter but I just wannted to go on to the next right away, My favrito part has to be when shen dance for that redneck town, it just makes me laugh. but now I'm confused what one of your story should I read next?
Lavender-Drop 2006-10-09 ch 30,	abuseit's been a real joy reading these stories, i cannot wait to get more of these characters.
Lavender-Drop 2006-10-08 ch 19,	abuseOh. My. God. I. Love. Gun. I was so sick of his baby drama, and that killing thing… :smiles: I’m in love.
Shadowfox13 2006-09-24 ch 30,	abuseWow, so I finally caught up on the stories! ^.^V Hey, will we ever see some of Merc's own torments in his past? Something he's not dealt with maybe? And Braxton...dude is really, I dunno, needy? Heh, maybe him and Pan should get together. LOL Or perhaps in the next life he and Wilbur finally find happiness togehther? Hey, if Adair got an increase in power as a personna of light, does this mean that Merc develops abilities pertaining to darkness? Anyway, I enjoyed that it was wonderful. If you ever do continue to write in that 'verse' I'll eagerly read. Hm, as for Stripes, I hope he finds happiness too. ^.^V

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