Wow, what a Fing awesome ending!! I love the tying memory and all. Ah, too bad Melissa went crazy and Kyle died, but really cool ending! I love this story, especially since I know the setting. ^^
Hillary

I love it! Brendans evil and Im nice...its like an alternate universe! Write more, i wanna no if brendan works 4 satan!

Wow, this is so freakin awesome! Tell me there's more because you can't just leave me hanging like this! Ah, this is so amazing! Keep writing!
Hillary