This is a really cool song. I loved it.

Wow! Very powerful stuff, I can see that you taking a break from writing just makes you better at it, keep it up.
Also if you oculd review any of my work and tell me what you think that would be great.

i was starting to miss you songs! wee they're bakc and even better (i didn't think it was possible!)

Good lyrics!
I was imagining someone singing it in my head. Great song.

I love the whole candy coated suicide thing. It gave off so much imagery. SO what if you haven't written in a while it was great. But you've got to write more so!

wow... very very powerful and sad... I like it a lot.. awesome poem

I love the chorus, the line candy coated suicide is awesomely outstanding. It stands out and has a fun but serious punch. Good job on the whole song, I rather enjoied it.

wow, great song keep writing!

I just love the "candy-coated suicide" line, I think that it's the strongest thing in this song. I think you've done a good job of this, the lines have a proper sense of flow and are informative. The only thing that I don't like is the last line of the first verse. I think if you go for a less obvious word for "knife" it would make it better, and I also think that "retrieves" is a bit cumersome in this sentence, so if you can find something else I think it would flow better. Otherwise, well done!