whaat? na-review ko n pala to? hahaha.. ang haba..

i think you overdid the rhyming.

totally agree with it. although i will confess that i have been in love but it was different, read some of my poetry and maybe you'll understand. more twisted than cliche. great poem though and am loving your fiction.
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HoLy!
i like this poem...it's so good >.< (coming from someone that usually doesn't read poems)
i just came across it over my email. those author alert things. and i opened it and read it and i thought WOW. it's very true too. but even if it's true, i guess it's human nature to go through all of it regardless of the pain.
GOOD JOB!

This is good! Love isn't all that bad, you just have to watch yourself and not go too fast. It's just a matter of saving the best part of you for the right one

Nice poem. But, it's hard to deny the emotion once it grabs a hold of you. m