Great intro! I'm loving the story already. Word of caution; be careful when saying characters names, because it's very easy to get confused when we're not used to who's who. It makes sense in you're head no doubt, but we're not as familiar with them. Though that hasn't proved to be a problem so far. Can't wait to read more! Update soon!

Kwel! Jakie's mom could run a bakery. What happened to your other story "A Melody to Listen to"? Oh well. Wonder what happens next!