| Reviews for The Stars Fell Last Night |
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Jo The Pirate 8/17/04 . chapter 1Wow. I am impressed. You used a word that I had no idea what it was - and that doesn't happen very often. What is postiche? |
Manuel Fajar 8/17/04 . chapter 1An absolutely stunning poem. A rapture of images and stretches of language & thought. I offer some minor editorial comments for your consideration. m I wanted to paint the smiles onto people’s faces— pseudo perfection that brings a postiche of tears. Instead stars fell last night into the lake, I scooped them out— Scattered them onto the sidewalk still burning, to make life more inspiring. Instead, feet were scathed and peeling— And tears that fell from my eyes Actually hurt. |