Beautiful. especially "And yet you cannot seem to choose, The flower or the rain."

Isn't this true of many of us.

wow.. very nicely written and I like how you separate parts into stars... great poem

i love it! i'd like to read this to the entire world if i could make them believe it.

i was at youth group the other night and i observed the same thing...every thing you say in your poem is true. beautfiul!

Nice, I really like all of the imagry that you paint through your words. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.