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Reviews For: Why does he cry

TechnicolorPants
2004-10-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was sad, but very good! It sounds like the kind of song I'd cry to when I'm alone...
awesome job!
xo~fruitcakes
Goldensong
2004-08-18
ch 1,
abuseYou like to repeat one line at the end of each stanza don't you?! I love the way you do that! Never works for me. Ah well. Next story here we come...
Artificial Refuge
2004-08-16
ch 1,
abuseV. powerful. I love how you ended this with 'Silence' (obviously). It's really good! yay 'lana!
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