SAD! It brought so much emotion when you used the repitition of "out the door" really liked this, good job!

~fruitcakes

Wow! Talk about powerful and yet so sad at the same time! I have a similar poem called "Gay" and story about being forced out of ur family called "Life." I loved it, espically the continuel "Out the door" It keep the being thrown out in perspective. Very good writing, Stefen, I did enjoy it. Since you said, I'm writing a new slash fantasy story called "Power of the Nivea," maybe you'd like to read it. I want all the reviews I can get.
XOXO,
Phoebe

I repeat what I said in "Why does he cry"-you like that repetion don't you! This one was just nicely angsty.

Very good poem. the repetition is very effective.

I like this one! It's really sad, 'specially with the repetition. I love 'Darkness impending' (randomly). Write more like this!

... Aw... I swear, if I ever have kids... and one of them tells me they're gay/lesbian... I'll just give 'em a big hug and love them more, for being honest... T_T

Terrible but things like that happen. I love how you used that one line over again each time giving it more meaning.