This is interesting, please update soon. I really want to know what happens ^_^;;

@.@; Agh! .:flails:. T_T; OMG~ ;-; WHAT AN AWEFUL PLACE TO STOP. T_T; Wah... ;-; I love the poem but... T_T .:sob:.

Oh ** god that was fantastic! I love your work so much. It's not even funny.

please please please please continue! this is awesome!

update as soon as possible if you haven't got writer's block for this piece of fiction!--so good.

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Nice nice. I wish I could have stumbled upon this earlier in the story but eh, I'm here now. I really enjoyed it, the story, the emotions displayed. Beautiful.

Poor Sam. Elijah needs a good kick in the head sometimes. I hope he gets set straight, not literally, before something really bad happens.

I can't wait for more!

Damn it , woman! I...I can't deal with this... *cries*

*whines*Really though, I love this story a lot. A sad and angsty story with a different approach. It's harsh and sometimes difficult to handle, it just hits you that hard.The blunt words and short sentences is what I *really* love about your "style" though. You are the only person who makes the word "**" hit every emotion at once.Great, great job! I hope to read more soon!

>>; Elijah's a real bastard... Sam is cute. Oh well, I like the story and I hope it turns out for the best!

i like it i love it i want some more of it ^^ update soon

*gasp* its- a moderately happy story! It's great, i love it. keep writing, and PLEASE don't do anything -too- horrible to the characters. please?

I Love it update soon

Cool !! *o*

~ Noelle ~

Aww... =[ Great chapter anyways! Lookin forward to the next one. Update soon!!