|Reviews for Enemy Against Mary|
| ICU2 3/10/05 . chapter 1
beautiful. great. beautiful. beautiful. I love that line, "How many hugs would it take to get Mary to eat again?" I know exactly how this feels for my very dear friend has an issue with weight though she is thin and very pretty. I am moved by this.
| Serene Waters 9/10/04 . chapter 1
Mm. That is an incredible piece of work. Emotionally degrading. It's depressing to watch people do that to themselves. Beautiful.
| Elenive 9/3/04 . chapter 1
Absolutely amazing. Every line is riveting. This poem contains feeling and you can picture every line.
| Ghost Love Score 8/29/04 . chapter 1
I like this poem. It really makes you think about it. Very good description
| SleepDontWeep 8/21/04 . chapter 1
WOW! i love this! it's so vivid and true and the random things you've placed in seems to fit in so perfectly! i love all your poetry! and thank you soo much for reviewing my poems! take a look at some more if u want although i wud LOVE ur opinion on my storys more because well ur so talented u'd obviously know if i was going wrong! anyways this is truly amazing and i hope that some day i can have even a quarter of the amount of talenet you have. much love x
| mmoonsshiner 8/18/04 . chapter 1
this is so beautiful.i dont know how it turns out for mary but hugs only hurt all the more during my stint with anorexia . my fav line in this poem is " How many yesterdays would it take to fill up tomorrow."
very well written i love the repetition.
| elven-lady22 8/18/04 . chapter 1
So much emotion. This really made me want to cry. Amazing job, Juliet
| citrus scented 8/18/04 . chapter 1
wow, this is so magical. The amount of desperate emotion in it- I really feel it! I love the imagery :"
and see the bones
fighting free of her skin.
it works so well, speacilly with the repeating questions flowing through it all. I loved it.
| openmyeyez 8/17/04 . chapter 1
you write so descriptively without making it seem like you're trying...i love it
| Manuel Fajar 8/17/04 . chapter 1
Powerfully visceral description of bolemia. m
| Isil Rose 8/17/04 . chapter 1
I can relate. I really love your work. It's just amazing beyond words.
-Aeglos (Isil Rose)
| xLecta 8/17/04 . chapter 1
"How many yesterdays would it take to fill up tomorrow.
How many hugs would it take to get Mary to eat again."
My favorite part.
God this was extraordinary. WONDERFUL work. Beautiful idea, format, wording. Just, wow. Very nice job.
| Lae 8/17/04 . chapter 1
That's so good, but sad. But its so, so good too. I love your writing. Read and review on some of mine. Either Dark Mistress 27 or Laelae.
| bach-player 8/17/04 . chapter 1
very moving piece about eating disorder...
| xHannahx 8/17/04 . chapter 1
i just read that and it made me cry. i went through a patch of anorexia, not nearly so badly, but i never realised quite how i affected my friends and family. i love the feeling in this poem. its amazing. thankyou.