I feel it. I so feel it. Job well done.
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This is a good one...I love how it rhymns also...sorry, I just love rhymning. I don't get how you can make so many wonderful poems, Ash-chan...gr...I'm jealous now. XD Oh well, at least I get to read all of them! ^^

*shivers* Whoa. This hits home... Good work. ^_^

Great imagery. Great expression. Great poem.

This has a beautiful start and then a nice turn, great ending as well.There wasn't anything I didn't really like so good job and keep writing,
~Akainoyume~