Now you've done it, Amy. You've made me cry!

that was really cool! Please r/r my stories!

GREAT ending line. that just sent shivers up my spine. i really liked this story - it was sad, pitiful. isnt that weird how one thing someone says or one conversation can make ideas come flying to mind like that? anyway, this was a good, heartfelt story i thought. you seem good with the first person. way to be
Mack