Goddamit, I didn't come here to be saddened. But everything I've clicked on has done just that. It's bizarre how much your work can tug at me sometimes, or perhaps I just come at the wrong time. This is beautiful because I know just such a place, and because I was going to depict on canvas for a cause that has now been lost ... 'dappled here and there with autumn care' indeed. Thank you for the picture. I needed to psych dissociation.
- aleppine -

wow that was good i wish i knew of some place that was actually like that. you are a wonderful poet.
fayth

beautiful. i loved this. so smooth and sweet. an easy and pleasant read.
~Mack and Ty

I really like this poem.
The rhythm is amazing i don't know how to describe it.
It's a great poem.

Wow...There are no words to describe it!! Wow! Excellent, excellent job.