Hmm..its pretty good. Only thing, the whole idea about orcs and hobbits reminds me vaguely of The Lord of the Rings. Its kind of cliche, if you know what I mean. Like, you have this heroes fighting 150 orcs and it makes the battle seem...unreal. Like, the heroes don't even get hurt! It's like they're immortal or gods or something. Either that or you make the orcs sound pathetic. Where is the pleasure in battle? Where are the wounds that heroes grievously suffer while they struggle to fight the overwhelming mass of orcs? I don't see any of that here. Well...other than that, this is a pretty good story. I hope you continue, but I don't know why you haven't updated for a long time...? maybe you gave up since you got so less reviews? Well this story is pretty good so don't worry about people not reviewing.

Conquest

I'm impressed by the quality of this story; I can't think of anything that needs improving, and the plot has grabbed my attention.On another note, bringing down meteors is ranked only 3/13? Or is it higher in the chain? Either way, impressive.