I LOVE IT! Wow, Danielle, you really outdid yourself. It's so passionate, so EMO! I really do love this one- especially the last 2 lines. This nearly made my cry. Keep writing this type of thing. You're so good at it! This is going to be in a book someday. You have talent, girl!

This is a cool idea, but I think you should keep the rhyme and rhythm schemes consistent, or just write it as a free style.

Awesome metaphors and imagery. "Watercolors" doesn't quite rhyme with "forever," but that's okay, because you did a really great job with this poem. :)

I love using colors as a metaphor, so this is a pretty cool poem. I like how it rhymes too.
If you want to know how I came onto this poem, Rachel "advertised" it.