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| BecomingMyself 2005-02-02 ch 1, | Very sweet thought to create one's own world to get through reality... Nice work, keep it up! |
| DrammaQueen 2005-01-15 ch 1, | Amazing...i loved it nice job |
| Once in a blue moon 2004-11-29 ch 1, | ...ah! in. spi. ered! I must go draw it! nice imagry (obviously, if I now want to go draw it, but still, it must be mentioned) On the by and by, you reviewed something called "Music" about an eternity ago. The 'other half', as you could call it, of Once wrote it. She only spiffs around once in awhile, and I think you might (maybe. possibly. there is a slight chance.) have seen the difference in our styles. so that's that. good job! |
| Incrys 2004-08-21 ch 1, | Wow, I'm used to violin references when reading your work, but the piano worked here. I liked the imagery of walking through the wildflowers bare-foot. |
| obsidian katana 2004-08-20 ch 1, | great piece. nice metaphors, deep message you have here, nicely conveyed through this poem. i like this a lot. awesome work! |
| Chyriyu 2004-08-18 ch 1, | Loved it. ^_^ Wildflowers are pretty. Keep it up. |
| Rose-Dreamer 2004-08-17 ch 1, | Very cool...Love it! |