Hey I accidentally added you to my Author Alert list, soree for my stupidity! Again, gggreeeaaattt story! Even in death you find hope! You're so inspirational! *sniff* I wish I view life the same way that you do!

Very,very good.

beautiful, thanks..

I really enjoyed your story. I think you're a good writer. Your sentences are not too wordy or mushy. Everything right to the point which I like very much.