Heh, it's simple and cute and it's cool. definitely portrays some emotions i know a lot of people have felt before. kudos.

A cute little poem, very sweet. The only thing I kind of wish you would change is to spell every word out. Poetry is more formal then IMing or email, so I think it kind of distracts to use 'u' for 'you' and stuff like that. But that's my only problem. Good job. -Aemilia