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| azn pride!! 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse5 stars. - LOVE this story man! you NEED to continue+finish it!! AND wtf druggieaddict? "it is pretty insulting and offensive"? im asian and im absolutely NOT offended in any way by this story. you're way too serious buddy.. try to laugh a little! |
| druggieaddict 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI think you should put a disclaimer, just to state that you don't think of all Asians that way. I'm assuming you don't, right? Because it is pretty insulting and offensive. |
| XxFallenxX 2007-10-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love it! I'm Asian, and a girl, and none of this really applies to me... but I love it! |
| Margot Tenenbaum 2007-06-25 ch 4, | abuseomfg lol kelvin is hilarious! |
| white-clouds 2007-05-20 ch 17, | abuseI spent my whole Sunday afternoon reading your wonderful story. I love it! You have great characters and I want to know more about them. Will you ever update again? |
| wrambler 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abusei've read through chapter 6 so far i believe (i just read the chapter where perice acts really biased in favor of sherry over john). while the writing is very good some aspects of the story are quite confusing. 1.) Stanford is not an Ivy League school. The Ivies are Harvard, Yale, Princeton, Dartmouth, Columbia, Cornell, Penn and Brown. The expresion is usually "Stanford and the Ivies" 2.) If he is going to college why is it called "Academy." Honestly it sounds like you started off writing about high school and then just changed your mind and decided to write about college instead. 3.) Off that whole changing your mind thing, many aspects of the story seem more highschool-ish than college. For example: the drama plotlines and the fact that the freshman are so divided from everyone else. I'm finishing my sophomore year of college and I believe that I have been in a grand total of two classes that were only people from my year. As a freshman some of my classes had seniors in them. 4.) I didn't really understand why they were using a textbook to study philosopy. Why not read the actual text itself? It seems odd that they are relying on a secondary source when they could just read the words of Plato, Aristotle, Epictetus etc. 5.) What is an Eating Club? I think those are all of my questions and observations. The story is well written and fairly interesting. But right now I'm so bogged down in all of this confusion that it is detracting from my enjoyment of the story and I don't feel like reading it anymore. |
| The baava Project 2007-04-10 ch 17, | abuse*peeks in* It's been HOW long since I last left a review? Meaning, it's been longer since you've updated. hehehe, If you see this, I hope you're doing well. I won't say that it wouldn't be a shame if this story languishes forever, because it would. I'm very much interested in Alex's developments, and I have to say - I about died laughing at some parts of this story (the FEET), cracked up at others I probably shouldn't have (Alex's first dance lessons), and am seriously disturbed by the ending to this chapter. Not that I'm saying he and Kelvin shouldn't have had a blowout. Quite the contrary; I'd have felt cheated if you didn't write it in. I think it came out wonderfully. I just wanted to say hey, long time. :) And I'm glad I got to read so much of this. Here's to hoping there will be more, someday! Yours, baava (more familiarly, LoK) |
| wordyrandomness 2007-01-20 ch 17, | abuseHey, just like to say that this is a really great story. I read it in 2 days =] but when i got the the climax point of when we look forward to discovering what is 'Kelvin' i find that there is sadly no more. I don't want to sound pushy because i know you probably have a life but i would really appriciate it if you updated! Thanks o__< wordyrandomness |
| Melody. 2007-01-08 ch 17, anon. | abuseI'm loving this story very, very much. That little bit in a previous chapter describing Alex's attempts at dancing were so descriptive I'm beginning to crave some grinding ;D I really like how the story is finally beginning to show how one-sided everything really is right now, due to it being soley from Alex's POV. (dude I don't make sense.) haha, I can't wait till the next update. Also, I just have to say that the description of Alex's mum happens to hit very close to home. |
| lilylupin7 2006-12-28 ch 17, | abuseAny chance of you updating? Because this is an amazing story. |
| lilylupin7 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is hilarious...honestly reminds me a bit of my Asian childhood |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-12-23 ch 2, | abuseBACKGROUND INFO! Haha. I just ate dinner. Don't blame me. :D |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseWhoO! ASIAN NERD! Azn PRIDE! |
| Small Marshmallow 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseo_0 To avoid my meandering thoughts and my severe digressions, I'll just give you the biggest compliment I can think of right now: ROFL. Dear Lord. That is one chapter to catch one's eye. Suffice to say, excellent work thus far. |
| Ephemeral Dreams 2006-11-13 ch 2, | abuse"My father worked at a large pharmaceutical company..." Just don't tell me it's Squibb-Bristol-Myers and I'll stop freaking out about how deja vu-ish this is all getting. Not to mention my old sister interned at Stanford for a year after she got her M.D. |