wow, this is a great poem! i love how you make it all ryhm, ack WHY can't i do that?

title ideas - My godsend - When i met you - All i know - "the name of whoever this poem is 4" of invisible love and empty wings.

dont ask me about the last one.

i really cant express how much i like this poem each word is perfectly chosen everything fits, really keep it up!

Nice, I love your voice in this, its strong, yet longing. It really helps the reader to better relate to the words. Very good piece, I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.