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| Waterhaul 2005-09-28 ch 1,   | GOD story! |
| Oogs 2004-08-18 ch 1, | Wow! Yeah, this is definitely pretty dark. I liked it though, I have a dark story of my own up at the moment, though it is not as dark as I wanted it to be because I used it for school. Anyways, is that like, the end? Or is there more that you are working on? I think that it would be way awesome for there to be more, like, more of a history of the main character and things like that. Anyways, great story! |