I'm unsure what to make of this, I can see its very well written and shows lots of talent but it just doesnt strike anything in me, sorry for being honest but personaly taste a guess. Perhaps its something todo with my gender or just me lol. Anyway rambling here.
Balthasaar

I find this piece to be expressive, and entertaining. It makes you think and want. Although I didn't like how it ended, it was still presented in a fasion that expressed itslef very well.

Beautiful, this can be interpteted in so many ways that I don't think that I could come up with the right one, but this is amazing. So much detail and emotions with such a cleare message. I love it, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.