"A skyline of angles and edges" was a brilliant line. "monotonous" in the second last line didn't work to well for me, but I think I'm reading the piece a bit more..spritely than was originaly meant. Though, barring that one word, the 6th and 7th lines are quite well crafted and do a really good job on imagery for me. I like this piece.

Reminds me of a modern art museum, maybe the Hirshhorn. Also slightly Magritte. Beautiful & abstract in any case.

I like this a lot, but I can seem to shake of the feeling that there's loathing there, is it just me? Anyway, well written.
Balthasaar

I love the imagry. Esspesially the last line, it was unexpected, but really fit well. Wonderful work.
~Thanks, for a piece of your mind.~ Kat

A skyline of angles and edges.
-I love that line, really this is one of the better pieces that I've read on this site, you are a true talent, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.